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I made a comment about the story "Destined To Be With You - Chapter 12" on Wattpad:

@cluelesshannah I know :( He’s just on the sucky end of it all. Yeah, Emily does have to deal with so much but she shouldn’t be so doubtful of Ben. He does love her, but maybe not the way you’re suppose to love someone you’re romantically involved with. He probably did at one point but now it isn’t the same. Yeah, Liv is having a tough time, but she’s trying her best to make the most out of the situation. She is trying to look on the brighter side of things which is different from the way she use to be. You’re right, something needs to change for any of them to be happy. Aww thank you! You’re a doll! :)

I made a comment about the story "Destined To Be With You - Chapter 12" on Wattpad:

@halpal702 Yeah :( Ben has had to deal with so much. Emily is honestly having to deal with so much too but she agree to support and be there for him. She needs to be there like she said she would. Yeah, it’s pretty sad all around. Lol yup, Daniel and Sophie are definitely enjoying being engaged. The only happy couple in here lol. Aww did you? Thanks so much! :D

I made a comment about the story "Have a Little Hope - 3. Have a Little Funeral" on Wattpad:

First I love that she has pink hair and how her dad was always supportive of her having it. It just shows how close they were and why Hope is really having such a hard time accepting that his is gone.
Aw Hope :( She really wishes her dad wasn’t dead despite everyone reminding her that he is. Everyone is offering her help but she doesn’t seem to want it. And that’s understandable because she doesn’t really want to move on. I feel like she’s being a little harsh with her grandparents because they too lost a son and now they had to make arrangements for his funeral and take care of her also. They are grieving too and Hope doesn’t realize that. But then again how can she? She didn’t want this to happen to her dad. She wanted to keep him alive. I love how Belle (from Belle’s dreamer??? If so, I love how your stories entwine! :) ), Eloise, and James are there for her, helping her through the funeral and her dad’s death even though she really isn’t open to it.
Ah, Phoebe! You write about grief so well! I love that Hope is having such a hard time accepting her father’s death not because I like her suffering lol no that’s not it, but because it makes her so realistic and believable! Real people don’t get over death and accept it easily and it’s amazing how you’ve managed to explain her struggle so well! I love this so much!

I made a comment about the story "Have a Little Hope - Chapter 2. Have a Little Scream" on Wattpad:

Wow. SUCH an emotional chapter! It was so well written that I actually felt every emotion. I’m so seriously blown away at how greatly developed your characters are and how you’ve managed to embody the character, if that makes sense? Like I feel like I’m actually reading what Hope really feels not how you as the writer feel. All of it is just so real. I’m really loving this, Phoebe! You’ve really immersed yourself in the story. I love it!

Reading Hope’s internal struggle to understand why her dad needed to die to save our lives was just amazing. It all felt so real to me. Awesome job! And I’m loving the quick updates! :D

I made a comment about the story "Destined To Be With You - Chapter 12" on Wattpad:

@ItsJamiMami4RealzTho Aw thank you! You’re sweet! Yeah, Emily just can’t handle it anymore and she needs to let him know that she can’t be there for him. You really think Liv is his destined one? :D Yeah, they are similar. But Liv never doubted that Ben loved her. She knew but she was just scared of getting hurt. And Emily is just doubtful about their relationship and how Ben feels for her. Aww thanks! It means a lot! Thank you so much for reading :)